Sample manuscript analysis and book review excerpts

Selected comments from past reviews;
... Only the most authoritative, experienced author would want to stake out this claim. It’s more effective to state what YOU’RE going to offer that’s different and distinct from what’s available...
... I like your term: “master influencers.” You make it sound, however, as if the quality of the product is immaterial–that the only thing that matters is “marketing and innovation”...
...At the top of this page, you have a variety of phrases that are NOT sentences: “So much theory” ...
... Overall, Chapter One is somewhat disjointed, the language is rough, the message is fuzzy, the flow is somewhat abrupt ....
Remember: Chapter One is THE MOST IMPORTANT kickoff to any book–the welcome mat ...
... I like the idea of a crisp, snappy handbook or field guide that offers down-to-earth, practical promises for change and that can be utilized as a quick reference source for your seminars...

Book #1, conceived as a cutting edge business manual that goes beyond standard management principles to exploring the personality traits and psychological habits of anyone in the work place. The premise here is that by understanding these underlying forces, a company can establish better communication and enhance productivity.
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Book #2, conceived as a handbook to be used during motivational seminar presentations and it draws upon a variety of self-help principles for marshaling inner resources in order to realize any life goal.View Excerpt

Book #3is "SO YOU WANT TO WRITE"– a practical, easy-to-follow guide for anyone wanting to write their first book.View Excerpt

Book #4 is an autobiographical work about a woman's challenge in releasing a “black spell” that had thwarted her emotional development, allowing her to move forward into a happier, more fulfilled life.View Excerpt

Book #5 is a leadership guide written by the CEO of a corporation designed to enlighten both new and experienced business owners.View Excerpt